Adeeb_Zayan

Tbh I came to this not having much expectations. Although the plot is something that has a very high potential but it'll only work in the hand of a really good writer. And let me just say sir, you've really exceeded my expectations. If you continue with this quality it might just be one of the best stories in here

You know how to write

He was a different breed. If you tell his life story to someone who doesn't know of him it'll sound completely made up with how much accomplishments he has made. He's a real life protagonist

In the old testament killing is allowed for either to hunt for food or for self defence. I'm not a Christian I only know bits, so I'm not 100% sure if it's true

6th commandment: You shall not murder

This has very high potential. I hope the author doesn't drop this.

I never thought i'll feel this sad when I first started reading this. The writing is beautiful and the characters are consistent. Its a masterpiece

How tf are you managing to write so beautifully every single chapter