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author there is something i don't understand, at first you said the original owner of the body killed himself because he was a slime and wished to even be an ordinary human but then you also said that when some people with unique race and class do die in the game the penalty they gain can sometimes make them lose their race (so) why didn't the mc kill himself in the game but real life. I don't get this common sense
try making him human not a robot like sometimes making him enjoy his wealth if he will be getting any,not letting him focus too much on acting and revenge but other fun things to not feel bored of reading
and yes he is supposed to be invincible with that kind of skill set, who won't
then don't give him skills he won't utilize, it's just brings our hopes up
then how do you expect as to enjoy your novel ,some things like this just makes as fast forward your novel without even reading properly which makes as not enjoy it and at the end quit early. it's not anything about OP ,it's just boring
what's the point of giving him legendary skills when you're going to make him play like shit vs Napoli (at the end they will say character development),character my ass !mtchweee!
Naaa Ghanaian
but your mc seems to be behaving like a child instead of him being something years old
I don't like stories with mc's suffering so much which can be easily avoided, sorry ",bye.
is the eastern country the only country on the planet because it's almost going racist way ,please let us non-eastern people also enjoy the novel small or is it u wrote it for eastern people . sigh