The story was indeed a bit confusing, but it's easy to submerge into it. However, I see the author wants to make a great character development in the main character. Therefore, the main character was decent due to how easy it was to fall into a depression. Yet, it was a good start. I am not sure that I can tell this, I am a new writer, but I would like to suggest an author to do some minor editing. Also, the author has a case of telling rather than showing. Overall was great, the writing quality is pretty good. Pls update more🙏

The writing quality is decent. Also, love how the characters were introduced. A highly recommended book that has unique characters and do not forget that, every character was created beautifully👍👍. However, author should post more chapters...a dead-end chapter sure is torturing😓

Greetings readers, this is the first time I'm writing a novel. My lack of experience is noticeable. Therefore, I'm in deep appreciation if someone generously leaves a few words to note me for the mistakes I've made especially in my grammar and writing qualities. Therefore the energy I might receive from the comment will help me stay awake and keep the entertainment with a satisfying update stability. Have a great day:)

The writing quality is pretty good. Yet, the story wasn't that confusing...it's easy for me to submerge into the storyline. However, the author should post more chapters...having a dead-end chapter when the story starts to get interesting...really 😓

The World-building is decent...I got confused at first but slowly got into it...reading this at a slow pace is recommended for a deeper understanding of the characters...However, author... should try to put a title for every chapter. This will help your readers to understand the main point of that chapter👍. Good job and have a good day.

The writing quality is👏👏... I love the way the author went too much on every detail of the character's expression during the conversation, even their body language was written there...this made my brain capture the scene easier. Well done.

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The writing quality was great👍. . It's easy to read. I've only read it until chapter 5 but, i felt the lots of intensity in the story line...world background also creative and the character dialogue was pretty good👍👏

I love your writing quality, it's so simple and easy to understand👏👏...also the characters has their own uniqueness. Keep the work👍👍

A refreshing story.. Also, love the book cover..Thumbs up for the story development... 👍👍