GwyndSeth

If you enjoy Naruto, this novel is very recommendable; finally a remarkable story among so many mediocre ones, although it’s a shame it only has 14 chapters.

Before I read, I check the description, its tags and almost always the comments. I didn’t know that having the “comedy” tag was the same as trash. When I see a novel with the “comedy” tag, I’ll throw it away without even looking.

If you like the typical isekai anime, you’ll like this novel because it’s the same. I’ll give it 5 stars, but I won’t keep reading it, I was expecting something more adult.

This ruined the initial novel for me, what a shame, the idea was interesting because they always start with combat classes.

Oh my goodness, I only made it to Chapter 2! This fanfic is definitely one of those mind-numbing reads, especially if you've already devoured every other One Piece fanfic. The author took the "COMEDY" label too seriously because the plot is a complete joke. So the protagonist gets 80 points by scaring some guys who want to kill him. While he's distracting them, he checks out his system shop. He finds a healing item he needs to survive, and it costs 200,000 points. But, since it's his first purchase, it only costs 80 points now. Seriously, speechless. If it starts like this, I can imagine how ridiculous the system will be for the rest of the novel. And to top it all off, the cure is for Chopper, so he can fight. And to inject it without Chopper turning around and dying instantly, the author, clearly out of ideas for developing the situation, resorts to another ridiculous plot convenience. The MC offers to kill Chopper with these strangers, and they readily agree, using the excuse that they're "tired." Tired of what? Chopper's incapacitated and can barely move! Why would you let an enemy get close, especially one who just proved they can materialize things out of thin air (by buying and materializing the purchase), and on top of that, took their Devil Fruits with a level 99 upset stomach potion? If he took their fruits with a stomachache item, the situation becomes even more absurd, and it's only two chapters long. I can't even imagine what the entire fanfic is like. If you're looking for something serious with a touch of humor, stay away from this one.

For now, I'll leave this rating because it only has 13 chapters so far, and they're really good. I hope the quality doesn’t drop later on. With this novel, waiting for new chapters is going to be tough. I can’t stand the wait, and yet I read it. I'm a masochist. If you're wondering whether you should read it, the answer is obviously yes.

So far I’ve read up to chapter 47, which is the latest one. It’s not bad. There are a lot of stories like this, but this one is the best I’ve seen, at least as far as I can remember. I liked it mainly because the author clearly isn’t a beginner at writing. These kinds of novels are usually bad, if not all of them, because they feel more like a fantasy checklist than a serious story. You can really tell by the character interactions and the dialogue. It's super obvious when someone’s new at this. In this case, I wouldn’t say it’s a 10 out of 10, but it’s good. If nothing weird happens with the author, I could actually finish this novel, which is pretty rare for me. For now I’ll leave this rating as it is since I haven’t even reached chapter 50 yet, so it’ll probably change in the future.

La idea es buena pero la escritura es mala muy mala transmite mas una piedra , seria bueno que aprendieras y rescribieras esta historia en unos años.

Empieza bien, me gustó las habilidades dadas pero a mi los sistemas gachas no me suelen gustar por que son demasiados fuertes siempre y no hay peligro por lo que no hay suspenso es lectura automática sin pensar mucho solo por leer, espero que sea diferente esta vez.

Es una joya, me lo lei hasta el ultimo capitulo publicado que es el 103 seguido, siempre e querido un fan fic con tematica de big mom y este es 10/10, siento frustacion porque quiero mas y no soporto esperar ademas de no actualizan en un mes, espero que solo este haciendo mas capitulos sin subirlos hasta un tiempo tengo miedo que lo abandonen, entre tantos fanfic podria decir que es el mejor sin duda, esta tan bien hecho que no me se vino a la cabeza en ningun momento vale va a pasar esto por lo repitito que son los fan fic de one piece, si tienes la suerte de encontrarlo donde tenga suficientes capitulos para ti tienes que leerlo si o si, en este momento apenas hay comentarios pero confia dale una oportunidad.