the and gave gave out a large screeching

I thought livi was dead

great novel eady5to read and very intriguing keep it up author you just earned a fan

good book very intriguing but the grammatical errors are much although still understandable

try to correct this

too many errors

thank you and also enjoy reading and don't forget to vote for me if you like the novel

later on he gets overthrowned

oh! I'll put a yuri tag now

i didn't really get your question

In the coming chapters the MC's gender is going to change

if you do have any suggestions on how the story should go please comment, I'll see if I can add it

great book although I've only read till chapter 3, it was very intriguing but the world building... it lacks in that aspect though, aside from that, it's a great book

great book, although it's just starting, I'm already in to it. ps: author please update more, aside from that, I'll just drop my power stone

it's my story, I wrote that one but I'm changing some things and correcting some errors

great book author maybe you should try updating two chapters per day cause I'm really waiting for more and it also attract readers

where has this book been all my life

great book author. read a few chapters and I'm already in to it, it's really easy to understand and very intriguing 👍👍👍👍

ttbh love the story, but author Rina is not an object, please stop saying stuff like that

just read the first five chapters and I'm truly amazed. the author has a great sense of humor so I'll just go ahead and drop my power stone