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Good idea but horrible writing and myth mistakes 👎

Ok author I get he is a kid but does he really have to cry for everything? And why does he lose his mind every time he finds out something anything new or get a new ability? Like come on this is how a 5 year old would react not someone his age and abilities 🤦‍♂️

So he just forgave Elijah? I would tell him no and tell her he killed my unborn child and it’s mother so she can not be with him. It seems like he never told her that and everyone just forgot

Has a lot of potential but the author just made him crazy and then losses all reason👎

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He is mad for 500 years while he is trapped but just accepts going with the person sent by the literal two gods that he hates and put him there🤦‍♂️ also does not even ask her if the gods sent her when the mountain the gods put on him disappears👎👎 Make this make sense author

I thought this was a AU? It’s just all the same plot points, literally only made up the conversation didn’t change any of the story, even made him seem crazy and worse than the original👎👎👎

Seriously has he just lost all reason? He hasn’t even asked anyone how the war has been going since he’s been trapped in the coffin but instead just starts raging like what?

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A gun?

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Then why not have a fair fight with him? You just ambushed him when he was having dinner with his family and you gave him no warning just attacked him, like what? Author why are you making him the bad guy?👎👎