Noguenko

After reading 66 chapters, I'll give my review at this stage: An editor who's tired of clichés, bad characters, and bad novels (it could be me, but I'm not an editor) is reincarnated in the last novel he worked on, with the power to create characters. So far, I think his power is well-developed at this stage; his summons are strong and seem well-developed (unlike the original characters in the novel), but he isn't (although he's working on himself). Honestly, I'm loving the novel, but I can't give it five stars because of the brutal academy, the original characters, and the world-building. I know that's all due to the originality with which it was created, but I wish the protagonist's presence could influence the evolution of what's been established. And now I'll raise two concerns. The first is that the world-building is very basic from the start. And the second is that some stupid entity decides to give the original protagonist power-ups to make them stronger than our main character, as happens in other novels (which is why I've stopped reading novels with reincarnations). In conclusion, I recommend reading this novel; it's very underrated. I think reading it will be time well spent.

In the reincarnation statistics, it refers to 'Charm.' You must understand that 'Charm' and 'Beauty' are different aspects. Of course, it's normal not to be born strong, but the awakening of the ability is entirely different. You said it yourself, it's random. I say this because I believe there's a summoning ability within the novel that's more powerful than the protagonist's. Are the misunderstandings just luck? Initially, the fact that other characters are unaware of the protagonist's ability could be luck. But if it continues over time, it's a lack of intelligence on the part of the other characters. I mentioned this in my review, and for now, it makes sense that they fit together. The good thing is that the concept of 'Luck' could be used in ways limited only by creativity. It would be very boring if there were always misunderstandings that helped the protagonist, wouldn't you say? As I mentioned regarding the holy water and the silver, it's concerning because it creates a serious problem. I'll wait to see if there's a convincing explanation later in the novel, because as I said at the end, 'I'LL KEEP READING FOR NOW,' and if necessary, I'll change my rating, especially since we're only 30 chapters in. It seems you took my criticism badly. I think you're the first author who's gotten angry about one of my reviews. I want to make it clear that it was written constructively. I hope something in my writing offended you; if so, I apologize. I hope you understand that even if you explain certain events in the novel, some readers won't be convinced (as is currently the case for me). It's about giving an opinion; I know I gave it early, but I did it to contribute by sharing my perspective, and making it clear that I'll change it if necessary.

All chapters read (30), review: I'm going to give an initial assessment, and later I'll consider whether it's worth changing this initial assessment. The novel is entertaining me, but there are a few things to discuss. I don't feel like I'm reading a novel set in a vampire society. The author bases the novel on the concept of 'luck,' but I think the author doesn't understand this concept. Being born with good genes, being born into a good family with loving parents, awakening a powerful ability, etc... all of these have luck as a factor. The fact that the protagonist was born into these circumstances is bad luck, which contradicts his 'good luck.' The protagonist's power also deserves separate discussion. He summoned silver and holy water that could harm vampires (supposedly, silver in that world didn't harm them), because supposedly on Earth these objects could harm vampires, but on Earth there are only vampires in fiction, so it's impossible to know if these objects would actually harm vampires in the real world. Let's not even talk about the fact that we're questioning the existence of holy water on Earth. Pay attention, because this could create a major problem in the novel. What would prevent the protagonist from summoning objects like, for example, an Infinity Gauntlet (Marvel), or an object the protagonist creates in their mind or has seen in fiction on Earth (like holy water or "vampire-killing" silver)? For now, I'm going to rate this novel 2/5. I'm worried that the "misunderstandings" will continue to pile up to benefit the protagonist because that would create another serious problem in the novel: the characters' intelligence. I'll keep reading for now.

That doesn't say good things about most people.

An entertaining novel. I'm giving it a two-star review. The protagonist, at this point (Chapter 72), doesn't even suspect that his wives are reading his thoughts, which is strange considering how much time he spent with them in the other timeline. If he truly wanted to break the blood pact, I think he'd have many options (such as conspiring with other houses or races). And finally, the author has already confirmed that the harem will consist of three women, so we can be sure that the blood pact won't be broken and the protagonist will end up keeping his wives... Not that the author's confirmation was needed, given how the protagonist behaves with his wives. In short, an entertaining novel that goes around in circles. You can probably guess the ending.

An entertaining read, but not a good novel. The writing style is boring, with a lot of filler. Reading R-18 content is fine, but reading so many R-18 chapters in a row is very tiring. I would have preferred simpler writing. Adding the 'invaders' isn't a bad idea, but it was implemented too early. In this respect, SHGS did a great job; it took its time, but it didn't feel forced or rushed. The world-building hasn't even been developed. The main character being overpowered isn't a problem, since the title already gives you a heads-up, but I would have preferred a slower, more coherent development. The characters' intelligence is acceptable, the minimum one should expect from a novel. In conclusion, as I said, it's an entertaining novel, neither good nor bad. I personally don't think I'll continue reading it. So I think chapter 241 was the last chapter I'll read.

IMPORTANT: THIS NOVEL CONTAINS A LESBIAN SCENE BETWEEN TWO MEMBERS OF THE HAREM. 173 chapters read, my review: When you read the title and description, you have a specific idea in mind. Personally, I was expecting something like the hentai "Gakuen de Jikan yo Tomare," which would have been more interesting, but this is worse. - The world-building is poorly done. It doesn't feel real at all. Money, influence, laws, society, etc... - If the main character lacks intelligence and always gets their way, the rest of the characters are even less intelligent. An example is when the main character prioritizes allocating points to their libido instead of other stats. And of course, when a protagonist prioritizes their libido as if preparing for a days-long sex marathon, you know this novel isn't going to be good. - The system is inconsistent, and some of the missions are absolutely ridiculous. For example: the MC faces the wrath of a woman who intends to kill him, and the system demands he have sex with her without his time manipulation abilities and without mind control. What's the point of this? What's the point of nerfing his time manipulation abilities? And regarding his other abilities: equally pointless. Why does he have mind control abilities, addictive semen, a lustful touch, a bondage collar, etc.? He's a TIME LORD, not a hybrid of a time demon and a lust demon. In conclusion, there's nothing noteworthy about this novel.

I wouldn't have designed it that way. As a monster, the instincts of his race should influence the protagonist (to a greater or lesser degree). The same would apply to elves, demons, dragons, etc. By eliminating instincts, you break a large part of the protagonist's adaptation to his new race. If the protagonist was already a pervert in his previous life, his new race should have amplified his lust, leading to an internal struggle to restrain himself and avoid being hunted. I understand what you intended with that type of 'communication,' but unfortunately, it has caused major problems for the novel. The main protagonist has been lost; currently, the novel has no protagonist at all. Not even Hiro's girls can fill that role; at most, they could only be secondary characters. Communication provides connection and direction. It's like Tony Stark's armor or Eddie Brock's symbiote. Communication would have brought many kinds of moments that would have enriched the novel, and even, for a brave writer, betrayal, murder, or the end of a relationship. Rebecca is an example of this: Rebecca isn't a good host for Hiro. If we were all in Hiro's shoes, we'd train Rebecca with the aphrodisiac or separate from her. (By the way, it was said that Hiro's aphrodisiac was the most potent, and yet there are characters who can resist it or have a certain tolerance.) Regarding parasitizing monster girls, I mean (for example) finding female goblins and parasitizing them. I'm not referring to Elyssa or Luna; I mean that the protagonist has his own agenda. Let's talk about the protagonist. The problem is that Hiro is a pacifist. Altair is the only one who has discovered the protagonist's true race (which seems unrealistic to me, because Hiro's race is known as a race to be exterminated), and due to the power of the plot, she spared Hiro. Whenever someone discovers Hiro's race, will there always be some excuse not to kill him, or will they continue to ignore his true race? I'm sorry, but both situations are unrealistic, and because they're unrealistic, they only exacerbate the novel's problems. And with a pacifist protagonist who has no motivation or objective, it completely ruins the story. I would have designed Hiro as a cunning, manipulative, and intelligent villain. With a telepathic ability with his host. Objectives? To evolve into a humanoid race, conquer the world, become the father of a race, etc... There's no shortage of options. Thanks for responding; I hope my constructive criticism is helpful.

After reading all the available chapters, I'm going to give my opinion: The novel started well and showed great potential. It could have gone in three directions: erotic, dark, or erotic-dark. But it fizzled out. This is because the protagonist doesn't have a clear objective. He's a passive protagonist. I understand that he wants to keep a low profile to avoid being killed by humans, but he could always find suitable hosts among female monsters, or elsewhere. It's not like there aren't other 'Parasitic Tentacles' out there. On the other hand, I think the lack of communication between the protagonist and his hosts is another problem with the novel.

Don't worry, writing a novel that everyone will like is impossible. It's true that the space arc is entertaining. We'll have to see Earth's reactions, what will happen with the space entity, and how it will affect Liam. By the way, I think Liam has been in space for 42 days, but there's nothing to indicate he's 'logging in.' Maybe he's saving his progress?