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Trxp_QR9mthReplied to DemiGod_2972- Trxp_QR9mthReplied to DemiGod_2972
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This has incestual behavior from the MC, bro decided at 2 he wanted his mother to be his, I have no idea how this story is rated this high. This is absolutely vile and disgusting, read this this book if you like an MC who engages in incest I guess. I only got to chapter 5 (the incest chapter) and decided to pack my bags and exit the premises.
- Trxp_QR9mthReplied to Devils_hand
I think he meant that the romance was done bad, I agree with him as I don't want to read a novel with an MC who acts like this. This is just my opinion as I'm not opposed to romance but when it's done terribly it ruins the story. Though this is just my criticism of the story, at the end of the day it's your story, just keep in mind people may not want to read it which I think you've already done.
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you're not you when your hungry
[...Hungry… Food.] - Trxp_QR9mthReplied to D_Spectre
- Trxp_QR9mthCommented
*P.O.V you just got stolen from*
When he finally finished counting, he has £24,623 and 5p. Adding in the money saved by old Tom and he now has £24,780 and 20p. This little move made him a lot more money than he thought he would get. It's too bad that he won't be able to do this again any time soon. A one-time occurrence can easily be written off as skilled muggle thieves, but if it were to happen over and over, that is when the Aurors will start becoming suspicious. Tom doesn't need that suspicion. He'll get enough of it when Dumbledore arrives.