The story is so hard to understand. The names are frequently jumbled, and the story is confusing. It sounds good, but it needs to be heavily edited.

Very interesting story to read.

I am eager for another chapter

A very enjoyable read! Don't leave us hanging for too long.

My pleasure! I will look it up right away. 😊

Wow. Just wow. What an emotional ending. I thoroughly appreciate every concept presented in this narrative - each instance was truly worthwhile. As an author myself, I can assure you that I seldom purchase access to read a book. I have to give the nod to Draven for being the most remarkable character I have ever read about in a book. I greatly appreciate your exceptional work! The name (Delgaard) is going into a story I am working on. ;)

So meticulously written! And emotional! 😭

This book is interesting. However, it is so disorganized and hard to follow. If only the author didn't switch the time frame so often.

Do you mean "I am fine?" I am a little confused with the grammar here.