Goob_lemonade

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The characters are so human, the story is written beautifully, the constant weight of her mortality weighing her down is just sad, but shes so strong, she just keeps on moving, never stops and does it all with a big slime plastered on her face

This is a powerful fanfic, the light hearted humor, the interactions, action scenes, dialogue, the good and bad things in life, it's a tragedy, but i do suppose that those who burn the brightest, go out sooner then the rest, and burn bright she did, haven't finished the fic yet, im pretty far into the story and it's just beautiful, i chuckled and laughed at alot of moments and even cried once, it's being an amazing experience, thanks for the story author!

Thanks for the chapter

On the contrary, id say heatblast is slightly stronger, even water can out his fire out, we see this over the course of 3 different series, of course ben could mitigate this by focusing all hes hes heat into a small focused point as shown in omniverse when heatblast is underwater. Mr freezes gun is probably much more effective against him then water is, im not a DC fan so i can't say for certain but what im 100% positive in is the fact that the fight made sense based on what i saw on the ben 10 show. If anything this heatblast is stronger then Ben's, that or the mc is more creative with hes pyronite powers

Eh, i could see bullets bruising heatblast, not killing him but they definitely sting/hurt And this is DC im sure those bullets aren't completely normal, wouldn't be surprised if random thugs had armor piercing rounds or whatever

I think the power scales are fine, don't listen to the other guys, they just wanna see an overpowered psycho that beats hes enemies effortlessly Besides, im sure the mc will improve as the story goes own, this is only the begining after all, considering hes abities he has alot of room to grow an im sure you have alot creative ideas in store, everything's fine the way your doing it in my opinion. I liked the chapter, its not a godly master piece but its far from bad, the fight scene was decent and i like that the mc isn't just some die hard, battle hardened hero or a cold machine, it's like some people said, hes naive but that's not a bad thing and i makes sense, he only just started this hero gig and hes human hes bound to make mistakes and that what makes the character compelling, hes not completely stupid but when hes afraid or when he stumbles or whatever, that doesn't make him naive just means hes human. Anyways im walking in circles now, just know that you're doing a good job 👍

Thanks for the chapter

Brilliant

Great pacing with the story