Kirk_rw_C
Retired Website, Quality Control, IT & Training adminstrator/trainer. Yogi and violin player.
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Kirk_rw_C2dCommentedFlopped his pawn Should be flopped his paw
The boss finally flopped his pawn at him, shrouding Jake in pain and shadow.- Kirk_rw_C5dCommented
moved and stripped Should be moved and stepped
At the perceived threat, Darius quickly moved and stripped in front of Xenia. - Kirk_rw_C6dCommented
End of paragraph., last sentence Lied in in it. Should be Layed in it.
"The irony." He scoffed. That Lycan had successfully dug the grave of his mate by his own hands and Noah was going to make sure that she lied in it. - Kirk_rw_C8dCommented
Near end paragraph, just want get him Should be just don't want get him
“I’m just scared of him because he’s sort of scary. He’s never really said anything or did anything to me. It’s just his aura and like I said it was because of a condition he became my guardian and he’s already doing something very important for me and he’s strict so that’s why I’m scared. I don’t want to lose him, he did me a great favor. I just want to get him mad. That’s all.” - Kirk_rw_C9dCommented
were to live by sunrise Should be were to leave by sunrise
His Majesty had informed her that they would be traveling, and the day had arrived. They were to live by sunrise so they could get as early as possible since it was a two-day journey by horse. Raziah was all ready to leave and was walking out of the castle where the carriage was waiting for her when she felt that presence again. - Kirk_rw_C10dCommented
I match them Should be i march them
Everyone was quiet the whole time while I was swirling in thoughts. We arrived at my house after some minutes later. I match them to my room and close the door. Luckily mum is at the clinic and dad might have gone to see Dr. Gorden. - Kirk_rw_C11dCommented
something winded Should be Sonething whined
This paragraph has been deleted. - Kirk_rw_C11dCommented
on the child first Should be on the children first There are 4 of them
"Well, I'll go check on the child first," Bai Susu said, walking somewhat awkwardly toward her own bedroom.detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy - Kirk_rw_C11dCommented
Her skin Should be His skin She is looking at him and noticing his manly features.
Her skin could be fair as well, with sword-like eyebrows and starry eyes, and her facial features were almost perfect. When he was serious, he was truly charming.detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy - Kirk_rw_C11dCommented
After reading a few of the next chapters, I found the translation is excellent. Not sure how to go back and change my previous rating and comment about the quality of the translation.
Ch 16 Chapter 16 Am I Despised by the System for My Intelligence?_1detailRecently Dumped by Gold-Digger, Goddess Asked Me to Sign a Birth Consent FormUrban · Silly Little Bok Choy - Kirk_rw_C14dCommented
her inching hands Should be her itching hands
"We should go for dinner," Nessa stepped away from him before her inching hands reached out and did something she was going to regret. - Kirk_rw_C14dCommented
Girl like him. Should be girl like her.
"Follow me when you're ready" Nessa managed to say before she made a fool of herself. What kind of guy shamelessly flirts with a girl like him? - Kirk_rw_C15dCommented
were instinct Should be were extinct Meaning they no longer exist.
But he continued, "We thought that they were instinct by now but they live inside and rarely make any appearances." He explained as he watched her expression grow even more fascinated. 'i think they are purposely trying to make us think that they are extinct. So that we won't bother going inside the Forrest or bother finding them." - Kirk_rw_C17dCommented
started to take not Should be started to take note
"Come on, Jane is already here waiting for us." The two left out the front door while Asher grabbed a bagged lunch for the two of them. There were more fruits and even a small protein shake in them. His mother had started to take not of the needs they would have when working out like Cara and adjusted the lunches she would make. - Kirk_rw_C17dCommentedCh 2 DEVIL'S PROFESSION
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I am her Lucy Should be I am here Lucy
"You know why I am her Lucy, don't you?" Amenadiel said. - Kirk_rw_C17dCommented
by ten second Should be By the second
One that kept on mounting by ten second. - Kirk_rw_C19dCommented
The band was Should be The bond was
Fuck, he realised. The band was taking over for her. This was wrong, so, so wrong. - Kirk_rw_C19dCommented
His made Should be His mate
He shook his head a bit at that. It wasn't his fault that his made was human and had been in an accident.