I'm a rookie writer, all critism appreciated
Writing
of reading
55
Read books
yes
depends on what I think of, but probably no
itss chilling_immortal on dc
I'm currently in the 100's of the novel chapters and overall, it's good the only thing that I don't quite like is the fact that the Mc took the martial artist class because its only limit depends on the cultivation technique, but later its said that lords have no upper limit, meaning that he could've chose any class.
I'm sorry I'm not done with reading your novel yet, I don't have much time to myself recently so it might take a few days, if you want you can delete this review and repost it after I'm done with your review
thx, I'm not done reading your novel yet so my review will be in a few hours
sure
I didn't start reading this yet due to the fact that in the tags, you mentioned bestiality, could someone who already read the novel, explain to me if it's literal beastiality or wolf turned into a girl type beat.
I can't help, but ask, do the conversations in the novel feel real, because whenever I reread the chapters to spellcheck myself, I can't help, but feel that they seem robotic.
I am really thankful for you critism.