I_Am_The_Author

Some Chinese people hasv a weird sense of fashion 😑

Optimus Prime 😏

Holding back is good but not so much that you have to get injured deliberately. That's kind of stupid, as we witnessed in his last match.

What a creep.

I like the story and the quality, so I really tried to persist, but unfortunately, the unnecessary monologues and descriptions kill the joy of the story 😔. Descriptions and Monologues are good but when you start stretching it too long it becomes poison. Lastly, I like the author's writing quite a bit, I hope I'll get to see a story without the stretching game from the author in the future.

Ouh, he's definitely Chinese. Because this type of idiocy can only come from a Chinese man.

As I'm new to this, I haven't created any business accounts yet. So, I would suggest you give me your page or account where I can follow your work anonymously for now, and when I think I'm ready I'll contact you from there. How about that?

Thanks for reaching out to me. I really appreciate it. It made me really happy and hopeful for my future writing. However, as I'm a newbie author and haven't established myself yet, I don't currently have the means to cooperate in any extra endeavors with anyone. But in the future if I decide to go that route I'll definitely contact you first. Thanks again Miss Luna.

Feels like I'm reading the Author's POV in a slightly different setting.🤦

It was going well until at some point in the story the system became very vague, The author sometimes even forgets about the quest rewards. Other than that the power scaling is a little vague also. Except for those two flaws the story was decent.