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E_Oyasumi

E_Oyasumi

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Just a person doing this for fun

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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    Except for five minutes. Don't forget that Elric

    Despite his silence, Elric was rather sad about his lack of mana. He had come to a different world and fainted after making a single ball of water. That was the extent of his damned abilities! How could Elric ever face someone and say 'Your fate is in my hands' with just that much? He thought it was useful for when he couldn't sleep, but there wasn't a time when Elric couldn't sleep.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    Yes, you heard it here folks, Elric's absolute TOP "Oh my god I'm running for my life" speed, is slower then a literal quarter of a tired and sweaty kid's speed.

    Claude's sides hurt from the running and his pace slowed down, but Elric still ran at full speed, almost in a trance. There was no shaking in Elric's breathing and no sluggishness in his feet. Thankfully, Elric's full speed was still a bit slower than Claude's tired quarter speed, so he wasn't paced out.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    And that's the end of his villain origin story. Until he finds out lol

    That boy decided to trust today.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    And that's the start of his villain origin story!

    This is what he got.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    This frickin weeb. Seen to much isekai's. Don't ya know that's not how it works?... Mostly

    "Aww… There's no lord of shadows in this world?"
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    But mostly confusion. Like, really darn confused. Who was this kid again?

    The students again stepped back and looked at Elric. Some in confusion and others in disbelief… and confusion. Devon grabbed Elric's hands and pinned him to the ground, next to Claude.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    NANI?!?!?

    "The culprit of the incident…" the priest's hand flowed out of the robe. "Is you! Claude Almstedt!"
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    Sounds about right

    The priests and templars standing outside expected they would have to cave the door in after hearing of Elric from the head priest, but to their surprise, the door opened up on its own.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    So there's your standard isekai mc

    "The goddess truly favors him! Even General Volfram finds Sir Claude to be the most talented reincarnator to have ever come here."
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    Not gonna lie, that skill would be OP in a school classroom.

    {Unique Skills: [Awakening - Force yourself to stay awake for 5 more minutes.]}
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    His agility should actually be 0, cause he ain't ever moving from his bed

    {Agility: 8}
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    That apostrophe didn't need, To be there.

    Until it, all changed.
    This Hero is Sleeping!
    Fantasy · Chestnutriceeee
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Replied to Thelemonjuice

    Seems about right.

    This book has been deleted.
  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Replied to Cosmictear

    First off, thank you for the great review. Second, I would love to check your book out! If there's any flaws, I'll give honest, but constructive criticism.

    Cardfall Battlefield
    Games · E_Oyasumi
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Commented

    James used exactly 3 cards the whole game. Since most of his cards were discards, he technically used 6 in all. That's the exact number of cards he had the whole game. 5 from start draw, and another added by second draw. He then proceeded to win before a third draw. Trust me, I don't like writing obvious flaws in my novels, such as using more cards then he had for instance.

    Ch 4 First Game
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    Games · E_Oyasumi
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Posted

    Mandatory amazing review. If anyone has any suggestions on how to make this book better, please let me know. It will help make all the other reviews 5 stars as well!

    Cardfall Battlefield
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Replied to E_Oyasumi

    And by improve I mean tell me what I'm doing wrong. Some constructive criticism could help loads.

    100 Reincarnated Together in a Strange World
    Fantasy · E_Oyasumi
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  • E_Oyasumi
    E_Oyasumi9mth
    Posted

    I am not gonna be honest on my own review, let's be real here. However, my bias aside, this is my first web novel, so if it's actually trash, I would love to know. Need to improve sometime!

    100 Reincarnated Together in a Strange World
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