Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809

Wow ,now finally the story is taking turnes and twistes iam further more curious about wolf Empire

WRITING QUALITY IS GOOD BUT YOU FOCUS MORE ON EMOTIONS OF CHARACTERS . NOW THE DEVELOPMENT OF STORY IS AWSOME BUT THE THING WE NEED IN MORE DETAIL IS THE WORLDS IMAGE THE WORLD YOU HAD EXPRESSED IN FIRST CHAPTER I AM JUST WAITING FOR THE MASKMAN BECAUSE WHAT A CHARACTER DESIGN IS IT JUST AMAZING .KEEP IT UP WRITING QUALITY AND WORLD BACKGROUND IS THE THING YOU SHOULD FOCUS ON BUT THERE ARE SOME LINES THAT ARE MY FAVORITE ESPACIALLY THE MASKMAN LASTEST LINES

I THINK THESE ARE THE STONGEST LINES BY STRONGEST CHARACTER

really

O my God he should be the villan what a character just amazing

i think Aroxin is the main character

I can guess that this story will spread fire all around

I can guess that this story will spread fire all around

AMAZING STORY. i was so scared about the girl but then it was a dream and what kind of world is this i just wanna to know more about this world