Brings back nostalgia.

dude. The description is just like fang yuan. plain appearance but deep abyss like eyes.

I don't know why but this cliffhanger left me blue balled here. It is not a nice feeling.

At least he isn't in warhammer 40k. So thank God for small mercies. I will probably add this story in my list. I just hope author wouldn't needlessly torture his mc too much. Because corn's work get too edgy sometimes. But apart from that keep it up.👍👍👍

Thank you. It is not a good feeling to have blue balls the whole week.

Thanks for the chapter.

And So it begins.....

Overall unique and interesting chapter. I like how you explained away our mc's god ki with yamoshi ancestory. I like your character moments and plot progression and not devolving into a power fantasy like most novels. I hope you keep it up.👍👍👍

Dude the pace has become very fast. slow it down a little. Let dante have some of that magic training that ancient one promised. Add some character development and thought processes of different people if you have to. back to back action can feel rushed to us readers.

take my power stones but give me a chapter. Asap.

The story is fine overall. But I would recommend author to change the first chapter as it was not a good impression overall. To me he felt like a entitled Chinese young master with all his complaints. The rest of the story is good. The character interactions are interesting and he is not a two dimensional character which is great. I would recommend the author to make his own original storylines and not follow the canon too much. Maybe explore magic which is inherent in db universe. You can also add interactions with other aliens that we had not seen otherwise in canon like tuffles. Add your own lore if you want to like him meeting yamoshi and other cool and og stuff. Instead of following the same cliches that everyone seems to follow. Give your own twist to evolution of Saiyan and including stuff from gt and xenoverse and all that good stuff to make it more interesting to us readers. These are just my suggestions. Peace.

I said "potentially" powerful. With the system and his angelic heritage. He would surpass og Dante eventually if author kept a consistent power development. As for quality. At least the characters are somewhat 3 dimensional. And grammar is readable. And not collect all girls as pokemon type fanfic. Which alone puts it above lots of novel in this platform. So yeah.

One of the better fics out there in web novel in my opinion. Not a masterpiece by any means but a very good read nonetheless. It is always interesting seeing some good character growth and development. Some people may not like how relatively weak the protagonist is. But for me who has seen cliche multiversal dark edge lords making their harem. It is breath of fresh air for me personally. I mean potentially he is going to be even more op in the future than the og Dante which quite good in my opinion. The only thing that I can say to people who maybe reading this review is:

I have a plan for that. You will see.

Yes, to both.

I don't think doom would manipulate or threaten teenager. It would be more like. Come join me and we will make this world better kind of thing.

Hey, author can you tell me the source of the novel. And where to find it.

I love your novel. After reading so many fanfiction with same premise like mc getting op and collecting women like pokemon. This is a breath of fresh air for me. An original concept and the dark gritty universes that you are painting is just too good. I hope you complete this. Peace.

So, here is my review for this novel. I have never liked stories with system in it as they never allow character development to take place as they mainly focus on system and its many skills and powers which rarely gets used on main events. Not all stories are like that some are quite brilliant in how they employ their system but sadly this novel was not much from me. (Before someone bash me and say that it only has 4 chap while I am reading it. I am also talking about previous book in this).Character design is not good. Author has introduced plethora of characters close to our mc (Mostly females by the way) and they are all 2d characters. They always support mc and always stress relief him via sex. No one voices their opposition to his plans. Some characters only come for one chapter for mc to lust over and are never mentioned ever eg- shikha queen of monsters.MC is quite gary stu. He is born with op abilities and silver spoon. Which is not the problem as there are many novels with MCs like that. The problem is that I never see MC struggle much. He mostly steamrolls his opposition. And I hate that the female opposition somehow starts to lust him due to his dominating and handsome features. Which is just lazy writing in the first place.The last thing is the final fight bullshit the author is talking about. I mean my dude it is the marvel multiverse we are talking about. There is always something happening there. Thanos, Mephisto, Galactus, Beyonder. And God knows what else I forgot to mention. There is no final fight, it is endless struggle. Such is the nature of that multiverse. Peace✌️.