DaoistWiDBNg

+1

Well based background, similar to other works but different enough in growth pattern to feel fresh. Well written characters, design and personality is well established, 4 chapters in 2 days is great work, author has a history of maintaining good uplpad speeds and it is very unlikely to fail on this one.

Hela or rogue

Rogue, mahoraga can adapt to the power with just one or two rotations, maybe 3

I love these chapters, and maybe freya falls for bella in a perverse way like how bonnie and clyde were lovers and criminals together, they both have rotten souls, just a thought. Love your work!

Well look at that, another Bronz fic, its going to be good. *reads first chapter* Damn, Another masterpiece waiting to be followed, another thing to look forward to 3 times a week.

Loved this, honestky i don't think I've ever read smut that did futas better than this

I read further, it gets so much worse, please refund my time, or sanity, or delete this. I really did try but man did it just get so much worse, fuck the plot, fuck changes, fuck growth or development of a single damn brain cell in the mc's head. In terms of agony, even there it fails to be unique or special in a horrid way.

Honestly, its pretty dog shit to read. Several early chapters dedicated to saying the same shit over and over, forced and unnatural character thought proccesses, moderately okay gramar, but this hurt. Great idea, maybe let someone else write it.

I can't wait to see the improvements! I absolutely loved the original attepmt am increadibly eager to see the changes and how different the rolls are in this go around, in the last one he becams and absolute tank unit and brawler, so i wonder what will happen this time