Promezus
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May be you are talking about Styx River ?
correct.. story must continue. even if they were high level NPC let's say 10000 level still, I will find some way to continue story, if not, tata bye bye story end at chapter 1.
my point was to add the betrayal, that even you know someone since childhood and grew up together, in face of greed, power anyone can turn against you and can betrayed you... if she could have told her for keeper for money there she would only get the money but here money, fame, power, everything
I got your point, but he is a MC, every story whether it's novel, manga, manhwa, manhua, movie, web series whatever revole around one character called as Main character.There always a trigger point, a breaking point where one character journey start to explore the world and become powerful. She can get any eye from any random people then that random one become the MC or if not MC, then may be a friend of MC ? sister of MC ? Wife of MC ? mother of MC ? father of MC.if not ? then it would be totally random story of someone without any goal and destination, nothing at all..
Ok so as I already told the selection to tower where you can bece hunter is random and less than 18 age, now Kimiko adopted by influence family but still she did not get the eye.. So ? this was only the way left where she can take the eye of someone else and she knew the perfect candidate for it.
yes :)
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I want to maintain the authenticity, a touch of human, I know it is not perfect but in reality there is nothing perfect, world is advancing at very fast pace, but still someone should maintain what actual humanity means.. But yeah I am writing my new novel and use some AI tool to Deliver best grammatically content possible and my thoughts
yes, you are also right, it could decompose but isn't the perspective of common human knowledge of current world? As a writer, I read many comment on this, but what I observe every comment based on the knowledge of the current world i.e. earth. But this world is not derived from the reality of earth but a fantasy. The world where magic exists do you think same law will be apply here as well? What if he was alive ? what if he using his life force to keeping him alive ? what if? What if? and this what if ? I explained as well.
Because this is the theme of it *hmm.. #Vampire #Shadow #Blood, I will explore it more in my next novel
No :) but he gave this System to him
Hmmm.. Thank you for this valuable information :)n