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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
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    After reading chapter 1 until 7. The story is a little messed up. There should be only one focus. I will continue reading this. It's kinda good so hope I the author will improve the story.

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    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    Attributes should be better.

    *Author: Uhh I've been putting a lot of confusing terms here. Like the attributes and stats. In my opinion, they are similar terms so I just don't know what's more better to insert. Sorry 🙏
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    I think there must be a problem here the sentence was just cut off.

    The reason why Giann was hunting these Rabbits who were 3 levels above him was the Haste Rab
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    *isekaiIt's kinda hilarious if you write a japanese verb then to make it past tense you just add "d."

    "This game too real! Feels like I'm in a different world. Did I get "eskaied"?!" another player, who was a berserker class, asked himself while pinching his cheeks hoping he got reincarnated.
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    Not necessary because in some games players could attack any NPC so uhh. Well since most games dont't have that feature I guess you could use this concept.

    [But there are certain limited benefits for an NPCs. I mean they couldn't be attacked by players unless the NPCs are criminals and bosses. This could be the perfect disguise!] Giann thought.
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    Yeah you should really avoid these ones when you write. It should be better if you type your opinions on the last part.

    *Author: That's right! GO TOUCH SOME GRASS!! SHEESHH!*
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    MC having too much expectations haha

    "Seriously when I hit 17? Why not 18? Wait Amused Abyss said a Guide. Not with the fucking word system on it! Wait is this one of the stories where MC's receive some system the go crazy powerful and shiz? Sheeshh!" Giann spoke.
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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  • DeRuth_NG
    DeRuth_NG9mth
    Commented

    Kinda weird. You should avoid doing these. Btw, no offense.

    *Author:Herobrine in the HOUSE!*
    altalt
    Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!
    Fantasy · GIDICAsan
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