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The MC needs to tell him things as they are. Jon was improving, and if he plays his cards right, he could have Maeve to complete the family he always wanted. But for that to happen, I think he needs to stop seeking fame. If the MC can get that through his head, we'd have a good superhero, even if he's not entirely altruistic.

Come on Jon, you can do it! Now get Maeve to be Ryan's new mother and you'll have what you wanted most. Then act like a freaking awesome superhero!

It surprises me. If Jon doesn't give up and keeps improving and becomes a true hero like the MC wants, Jon will have everything he wanted: a father's love, the love of strangers like the girl, and maybe Mave will even start a relationship with him. Perhaps they could have a real family in the future, but it will be difficult.

Well, one more joins the group. It's great that you emphasize the importance of showing the severity of the injuries. Very good. Now that things are changing, and with Yuji's knowledge of the true dangers of being a pirate, perhaps the Straw Hats will become stronger by using resources from the world. Usopp using firearms, Nami with more inventions or searching for more treasure with her navigation skills, a Logia-type Devil Fruit for Sanji, and cursed weapons for Zoro. I can only imagine the crazy things you can write. Keep going, bro!

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The tiger Yuji Itadori or the brother Yuji Itadori,

is klein?,then it would be the other half of Renxue.