Thebumberserker

HOLY MOTHER OF ALL BAD WRITING AND FORCED INTERACTIONS. The pacing is abysmal, The MC is dumb as bricks and his personality gets a 180 change FOR NO REASON. Apparently you can get from kansas to new york in a couple of hours, Don’t even get me started on the interactions. Why is susan storm’s mother an Inn keeper? This writing is baffling me dawg. One second the MC is acting normal then the next day he acting like a yandere, sometimes he is emo then the next day he acting like the wrold is sunshines and rainbows. This story is just RANDOM BS GO.

All star superman.

Don’t fall for the ragebait.

This interaction feels so weird and out of nowhere 😅.

Ngl……this was one hell of a nerf, holy shit.

wtf are you gonna do bro😭.

Hate both.

I would not believe you.

Was the cliffhanger really necessary? I still don’t see a point in this development.