Jasonelrod40

Even though I find small flaws, I actually truly like thisbook. You've made it difficult to put down and truly a gem.

At the end of 360 they are in the spa where you leave it off after the attendant says "Master Lang?" there is no context or continuity from this to the next chapter

you lost continuity since the next chapter doesn't pick up where this one left off.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Thanks for the heads up.

Wow, holding back 35 chapters. How greedy can you get?? You write very well but you should be more reasonable like other authors and only hold back 2 chapters instead of 35.

Hey Vonscott, finish the book!

This is a great book but why lock out 30 chapters? Don't be so greedy!

The Orders are under an Empire.

I would love it if you are available to continue writing. This book is very good to this point but you seem to have quit writing. has your health gotten bad?