Jasonelrod40

So what's up? Did something happen to the Author? It's been much too long since the last chapter dropped.

Having the chapter is nice but please stop adding all of the empty space at the end of each chapter. You are robbing your paying readers by adding almost as much empty space after the chapter as the length of each chapter. this can cause the paying chapters to cost twice as much as they should. Thanks for your attention to this.

You duplicated passages explaining the actions upon returning to town. Are you in the habit of doing this, making chapters longer to gain from the higher wordcount???

Even though I find small flaws, I actually truly like thisbook. You've made it difficult to put down and truly a gem.

At the end of 360 they are in the spa where you leave it off after the attendant says "Master Lang?" there is no context or continuity from this to the next chapter

you lost continuity since the next chapter doesn't pick up where this one left off.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Thanks for the heads up.

Wow, holding back 35 chapters. How greedy can you get?? You write very well but you should be more reasonable like other authors and only hold back 2 chapters instead of 35.

Hey Vonscott, finish the book!