ZappierAlarm58

when the heads "Popped" I actually had to read that part again. I was like wow what a way to Go.. love the statement he made as well.

100 chapters in and now your turning the egg against him or your suggesting something will happen. Why Why do this! Change the fate since he has the egg and the beast tamer blood line give him the ability to change the fate of what ever is inside that egg.

you so turned it around so good .. I was so upset about that Damn box and Why is gluttony & greed not helping in any way. but you explained it they really are not supposed too and there is ramifications if they do hence Alex getting Smashed! But be real I really liked the time stop! You got to give that power to our MC

Bro not sure why you don't have him at a high "Will"? for one he is living his best life after getting Shot in the Head and Dieing... um Pretty strong will there. Then when he got Katara how many times did he get his Head Chopped off Until he chopped off the dudes head? Bro already "Got's" Some Seriously Strong Will!

Dude Got cheated on and lied too by the girl he really liked.. So he Decked the girl in the mouth Then got Shot in the Face. Dang bro I think i Would have some serious PTSD here.

You know keeping this short sweet and simple: Freaking Awesome Prologue

Good Chapter. but still parents talk. understanding about kneading dough but let's leave the parents out. it's a "Dragon" killer...lol

ch 39. big recap chapter basically. Man i don't need recaps of parents when the chapter previous was all hot and sweaty if you know what I mean.lol I love your work but please I know you need a word count but no more recaps unless it's a free chapter, please!

Will the MC have And Use Magic? also does the MC have a live Active system or just Staat point system?

No updates in over a month? is this book still a priority Author or are you doing other work? A different book maybe? or Something else?