DaoistadLP82

don't get where you are going with this story. is he for justice and rewriting the story or just an observer. marine are stronger thanks to him. What are his ambitions?

hey man, don't drop this fic. If some don't like, they shouldn't read it, simple as that and you also shouldn't care. Your writing makes sense, the grammar is correct, there are no continuity mistakes. i don't have to question myself when reading dialogs. The story has good writing but if you don't like the direction the author takes, don't read it. rather a story that has solid foundation and some sense making than a story that is a grammatical horror, where reading and correction takes place at the same time, a story where the protagonist gets from A to B suddenly without one ounce of sensible explanation. So don't drop the story after 187 chapters and if you do give us at least some kinda ending