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Hank_97946mthCommentedok so they know hes being attacked and for some reason the same govt that threatens everyone as soon as they get power is letting a newbie fight theur elite for how long? im not exactly convinced why its taken this long to prove wrong doing? they are attacking and threatening his family and they are guardians what else do they need?
' Even Brian says that they already locked the whole space, but I can still use the dungeon option of my system. Most likely it wasn't powerful enough to stop my system.' Allen thought that because he already knew that he could use the Dungeon option to escape from this place without any prevention.- Hank_97946mthCommented
you could of had him upgrade this when he fixed orphanage
Craftsman ( level 1) - Hank_97947mthCommented
author i feel like alot of ur story is basically stuff u have problems with other writer stories. i get wanting to address those problems with the whole system genre but u also have to remember to make ur own story good. like i feel likecthe last 10 chapters or so is just info dumps and u addressing problems in other stories. like u have to push ur own story along and honestly i have fallen asleep trying to read last few chapters.
Dante was forced to make this choice in a very small frame of time, given that he was in the middle of an active battlefield. The cacophony of sounds, like metal clashing, horses neighing, people cursing, screaming, or begging, all sounded in his ears and seemed to scramble yet also focus his thoughts. - Hank_97947mthCommentedCh 80 Infiltration
- Hank_97947mthReplied to Anubesetesh
it would of been hilarious if he called it quantum ramen.
By the time Dante was done and returned to the real world, he felt truly tired. He even found himself performing the breathing technique out of stress and was amused. He decided to continue with it and went straight to bed after eating some sci-fi ramen.