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trophymade7 days ago
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Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades
Fantasy · FailedWriter101
trophymade7 days ago
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Thank you for the chapters
Ch 5 Start
The Author's Descent
Fantasy · Pomu
trophymade8 days ago
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phone
"Wait... this isn't funny anymore," he muttered under his breath, his fingers tightening around his pho ne.
Mystica: Reincarnated Into A Novel As A Villain With 3x Reward System
Fantasy · Auvalen
trophymade10 days ago
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Congrats on being contracted !
Ch 30 What's Inside?
Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_
trophymade11 days ago
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Thank you for the chapters!
Ch 28 Minjae-ssi~
Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_
trophymade11 days ago
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Use a period instead of a comma in the 2nd sentence
'I mean, it won't hurt trying. Maybe I can go with some work,' However, before Juwon could turn around, contemplating how to make his way up, a voice unexpectedly called out his name.
Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_
trophymade11 days ago
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Uncapitalize ‘the’ or use a period instead of a comma
"Damn, really? I should probably do that too. I should ride the wave while it's still hot. Who knows where it could lead me," The first man answered in disbelief. He was regretful that he hadn't thought of that idea earlier on.
Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_
trophymade11 days ago
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A period at the end
'A week?' the thought made him uneasy,
Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_
trophymade11 days ago
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Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_
trophymade11 days ago
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Good first chapter. I’ve been looking for a novel about acting. To my joy, here’s one with a good writing style. Time to binge!
Ch 1 Dominating The Headlines
Legendary Superstar
Fantasy · SaltWater_

A King’s World

PLACED ON HIATUS WHILE I DEAL WITH SCHOOL!!! —- Father... bless me. For I am Leonidas... son of war." *** In the heart of the largest war on Earth, Leonidas II, King of Reformed Sparta, and Son of Ares, valiantly sacrifices himself. He knew it was right, but he couldn't help feeling so... sad. He wanted to achieve more, but alas, he couldn't; death has him in its grip. That was, until he met a deity. Now, reincarnated into a different realm, teeming with elves, dwarves, kingdoms, wars, and magic; Leonidas will stop at nothing to reclaim his kingship, even if it ends in a fate worse than death.

trophymade · War

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