FateFracturer
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FateFracturer3mthReplied to catha2- FateFracturer3mthPosted
Hello Brothers and Females, I am the Author of this story. Here are some things you need to know about me and maybe about this novel too .... hehehe. 1)To start, this is my first time writing a novel which means that I might make some mistakes here and there, so I will be looking forward on getting any feedback. 2)I know many of you will probably not even gonna start this story because of tags like #Harem #R18 because of the bad reputation of these tags now a days, but believe me there will be no Pokémon collecting (Harem) shit with my MC here and I assure you that all this will not be forced and will not ruin the story. 3)This novel will be long and I hope you will at least try to read the first few chapters of this novel to decide whether it is for you or not. 4)I am excited about this journey. My writing skills and my writing experience will only grow as I write this book. 5)Please point out if you find any errors in this book. 6)Last but not least I hope you will enjoy reading this novel since I am writing to share my imagination to you all.
- FateFracturer3mthReplied to Danta_Santa
hehehe ..... thankyou
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please read following chapter to know this.
A FUCKING GATE from the novel he was reading, but he soon calmed down as he start have doubt in his mind 'like there is no way it is the same gate as mention in the novel, right?', as he was think this a zoom voice came from the crack and a blue translucent screen appeared above the crack with a countdown "gate opening in – 30,29,28, ...", seeing this Leon was shocked once again as it was same as mention in the novel but soon he came back to his sense and looked in the eyes of his mother and sister and shouted "RUNNNNNNNN" and began running while holding the hand of his mother and sister, he also took a boning knife from nearby. - FateFracturer3mthReplied to Danta_SantaCh 1 CHAPTER 1: PROLOGUE
- FateFracturer9mthPosted
Man I love this story but the way you write, it's just too uptight, I mean who talk to an enemy with that level of elegance, it's like you are writing a play for opera or something, and there is that sentence that comes again and again "thrilled to explore this new world and experience everything it has to offer." this sentence is almost every chapter before c85 and sometimes it is more than one time in a chapter, and there is this sentence or line that you right in every new paragraph "there heart filled with anticipation and thriller for what to come" I mean come on man don't be so uptight. And don't try too much. The story is good and has way more potential than what you are presenting and please if possible change that uptight writing style. I hope this novel will become one of the best on the platform.