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Your opinion, my friend, but the things I have planned for this story will lead you to a different conclusion.

you know what... I will try and get pics of all of the new characters like Marid, yumi, and Kenta for the next characters doc. Something that will come after Olympus meeting arc

While I appreciate you giving my story another chance, I just want to tell you how wrong you are when referring to Marid and his power. Yes it is true that he has barely used power up till this point in the fanfic, other than his brief show of power during his battle with Zill's lackeys where he showcased his mysterious ominous/greyish black power (something you will learn about it eventually), but please keep in mind that Marid is son of Sirzech and Grayfia (2 of the strongest Devils ever born) and has been training eversince he departed the underworld right after his and Rias match for the heirship of Gremory. Not to mention he is an alchemist and a master magician; just look at the inventions I have mentioned throughout the story. On the contrary, I actually believe I have made my MC way too powerful and have to work tirelessly to actually not make him an OP one-shot MC. If you are unsatisfied with my explanation, just wait till the Kokabeil and the peace meeting arcs; you will understand why I am limiting the limitless potential of my MC.

You want someone as old as Rias and who also is the son of the strongest two Devils their race ever produced, to be strong and and PoD? Man that story would lose its charm real quick. While i get people wanting to see MC one shot enemies, especially the ones are hated, but having a super stong MC can mess up ur story for good!

That truly is funny! There are some DXD stories where they have said the clan ability for the Gremory clan was 'charm'. I am thinking about using that idea in my story sometime later on~

hmm what do u mean by that?

Only high class Devils and when they get of age i think! It is mentioned somewhere on the DXD wiki. Ravel was one of the prime examples since, during the start of the series, she was considered a high-class Devil, but she wasn't given an evil piece. Ultimately it could be her choice but seeing how even Milicas didn't even have evil pieces and he was the son of lucifer, i am sticking by my idea regarding evil pieces, one i have mentioned above!

Finally, someone understood the irony behind that!

Hmm, I can see ur point here; there were other things I wanted to say regarding the church attack, but I ultimately decided to leave that for one of the recap chapters I will be doing soon! Heaven and church didn't exactly go as scot-free as you think they did. But thanks for the comment i will make appropriate changes!

The point was to indicate that despite being gone for about six years from the underworld, Marid (MC) has had multiple mentors to guide him during his teenage years. Also, Marid is the same age as Rias, who is 18 years old, which makes him a legal adult. Not really a kid tbh. But thanks for the comment tho! I will make appropriate changes soon!