novuskai

An interesting synopsis and story so far with lots of potential. The writing is good especially when it comes to dialogue. Pacing is moderate which is alright to flesh out characters and plot. More descriptions of how the main cast looks and the world setting (Nestral) would help for visual clarity and reader immersion. Other than that and a few typos... good story! I'm a sucker for revenge tales. Keep writing, Author–san!!

yes sir

I'm big on short prologues that set the tone and give the read an idea of setting and where we're headed. Thank you for the feedback

🤣💀 thank you... bro was a menace!

Thank you... will do😭🙏🏽💀 I'm editing KR 1 as I write KR2

Great read! The author crafted an interesting world and system. I like how Sam and Abhartach's relationship plays around and subverts the "monster within" trope! Looking forward to see where the story takes us

Read the first two chapters and I'm already invested. Love the world-building (especially how the author uses biblical mythos) and characters! Let's see where the story goes!

iiiiihhh what a chapter!!!!🔥🔥🔥🔥