DEEP_SHEKHAWAT

Why are you involving Natasha in romance? She is an agent; it doesn't seem likely that she would fall in love. She is a Black Widow—who knows how many people she has slept with just to complete her missions? Why are you ruining the story by involving her in this?"

The story is good, but you should reduce the Main Character's (MC) interference. Show more reactions from people and mention the timeline—clarify if this is taking place in 2008 or earlier. Also, show the audience's reactions to the uploaded videos. Everything else is fine, but don't let the MC interfere too much; just because he is powerful, he shouldn't always jump into the middle of everything. It makes the story feel dull. Keep his involvement balanced."

> “Please don’t let MC interfere between everyone, and don’t let him include his own reviews either; otherwise the novel will become nonsense. What’s the point of praising himself? In my view, he shouldn’t even have that much power. What’s the logic behind giving him so much authority?”

His hair color is red, and everyone should know it. During the battle with Gaara, make him use adamantine sealing chains, and give him a personality like Shikamaru—someone who thinks a lot. Next chapter fast

Reduce the solo moments, show more teamwork. After the 3-year timeskip, include the Uchiha bloodline and the Flying Thunder God technique. Also, focus more on interactions with friends." And continue

Please don't involve flying thunder god technique he is allready powerful if you write he use fgt he is overpower and this fic is scens less please improve

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Ek bahut achi khani hai ager isme system nahi jodth to jyda acha rahta es tarh sa mc jaldi overpowered ho jyga usme kya maja ayga baki acha hain keep it up💯🎊✨🎉💯🎉❤️