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i know that Hiruzen isnt that strong but seriously ? it was too cheap as death.
Monkey D. Luffy of the original anime is stubborn, brave and reckless but not stupid.
your Fanfiction is good, very good but your powerscaling of One Piece is not only lame but inaccurate. a Yonko's 1st, 2nd or 3rd Commander are on par in strength with an Admiral or a Fleet Admiral. 1 Yonko = 2 Fleet Admirals = 2 Admirals = 3 Shichibukai = 3 Mihawk = 2 Yonko's Commander on the top 3 = 2 Garp Prime = 1.5 Old Rayleigh = 3 Old Garp = 5 Vice Admirals = 9 Rear Admiral. a Yonko can One Shot any Admiral or Fleet Admirals
imagine one piece of the og one piece this and Admiral saying things like : "" huh! am i that strong ? could i rival a yonko in strength ?"" Kuzan saying things like : "" if i am that way stronger than Diamond Joz, why did i wait until he was shocked after seeing Marco being attacked on his back by Kizaru. the same Marco was hit on his back because he have seen his father having an heart attack ""
Garp using advanced Conqueror's haki ? when ?🤣🤣🤣
he is trying to make an Itachi things, kill him !!🤣🤣🤣
Do you remember how easily Doflamingo defeat Smoker? vice-admirals are weaker than warlords on a 1v1.
chapter 1001, neither Garp, Sengoku, Akainu, Kizaru, Aokiji nor Zéphyr are in the top 5 of Kaido.
very good story but you must know that your powerscaling is lame. 1 Yonko = 2 Admirals = 2 Fleet Admirals = 2 Yonko's Commander = 3.5 Mihawk = 3.5 Shichibukai. = 5 Vice Admirals = 3.5 Old Garp = 2 Garp Prime