A very good start you got there

It is a great novel nice description very unique plot and the characters are fantastic especially on the last chapter i think it's the villain of the story i guess but even though hr is one hella of a guy. I like what you do in the interaction of the characters. I will be supporting you till the end

I like the character deiago he is so fun t9 read and i like what are ypu trying to do with magic and martial arts i think you did a pretty good start