ok so there was so points that could've made the story longer. like what happened to her sister she was horrible to her and that was left up in air, what happened to the crown prince and empress, what about the medicine sect.? there are so many places that can expand this story and of course you can't forget the guards love storyline either lol

another of characters look too similar but it's a good story line and it's mostly well written there are a few parts so far that could have been worded better

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book not complete cuts off in the middle

the book isn't finished and left off in the middle of a storyline. I personally would wait a few months to see if they are gonna complete the storyline before beginning to read as if you are like me it will aggravate you that it stops at this point instead of completion.

this isn't that bad although some wording and spelling could be improved.

this is the first one I'm reading what's other good ones?