Daoist6_9

It’s honestly baffling how you seem to have completely missed the point of my review while trying to turn it into a defense of your own choices. Let me break it down for you: The Cliché Line: You seem to be under the impression that I’m simply nitpicking, but it’s not about a single line; it’s about the entire tone of the description, which is riddled with overused, tired tropes. My frustration isn't about the specifics, it’s about the broader lack of creativity. A true writer creates a hook that sparks curiosity, not one that immediately shouts “I’ve seen this a thousand times.” It’s not that I think I can "do better," it’s that I can already predict everything based on the formula you're following. The Name "Ye Ming": Seriously? You’re missing the point entirely. It's not about the name being common—it's about how it represents a lack of originality.Ah, I see what you're trying to do now, and it’s honestly pretty ironic that you're attacking my nickname Daoist69 while missing the larger point about your own choice of clichés. If you really think about it, you’re calling out something as “common” while your entire premise is built on recycled tropes that I’ve seen countless times before. As for the "Face-Slapping" tag and your claim that I "expect" the MC to overturn situations, I’d like to ask—is there anything remotely creative or unique about the way you execute these face-slapping moments? Because, from where I stand, it seems like your novel is just following the same predictable, overdone pattern as every other cultivation story that promises an inevitable power fantasy where the MC destroys everyone who doubted them. The issue isn't that I "expect" the MC to slap faces—it's that there's nothing new or exciting in how it's done. Every time the MC is up against a challenge, it’s almost like clockwork: the MC does something powerful, humiliates his enemies, and leaves a trail of broken egos behind him. But where’s the innovation? Where’s the twist or cleverness in the way these situations unfold? I’d be more impressed if your story subverted this trope in some way, but it sounds like you're just playing it safe and following a formula that’s already been run into the ground. So please, don’t act like I’m attacking you for expecting face-slapping; I’m pointing out that your approach to it is devoid of any originality. It’s the same tired cycle, and there’s nothing fresh to hold my attention. If you can’t offer something more engaging than the same predictable setup, then I stand by my stance: there’s nothing here worth reading.

Are you really an author? If you were, you would have recognized the novel I posted. It’s a translation of a well-known Chinese novel, quite popular, in fact. Just like Check-In Sacred Body of the Ancients (Genius fights for hegemony Routine Novel), I simply wanted to make it available in English, so I shared it. Yet, you couldn’t even identify it. Even after just 30 chapters, it has gained impressive views and collections. It’s not another cliché.

3 Reasons Why I Won't Read Such Novels: 1. The description starts with the worst cliché line, which I absolutely can't stand in any novel. 2. The "Face Slapping" tag. 3. The main character's name is Ye. Seriously, author, are you out of your mind? Naming him Ye Ming is not only cliché, but it's also one of the most common surnames in cultivation and Chinese novels. Experienced readers can predict the entire story in an instant.

Its a unique Novel. With a great blend of Gaming world and Fantasy. ................. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I simply pointed out my observations based on the content, and I stand by them. My initial points were solid—there's a noticeable lack of scene description, and the interactions between the main character and others feel minimal. These are things that affect the overall pacing and immersion in the story. Stop framing my feedback as that of a simple-minded hater. I gave genuine, constructive criticism, not just to criticize, but to offer a perspective that could help improve the work. As an author, it’s important to take feedback seriously. It helps you grow and refine your craft. A fast-paced narrative is great, but balance is key. Descriptive scenes and deeper character interactions would add more depth to the story.

Writing Quality is like a Summary, I dont see any difference, there are hardly 10 dialogues between MC and any character, except that consciousness of Universe , Who literally grants everything, There is no point in this Novel, No unique thing, The author stuffs the MC will all the things needed in Magic Sword World, and As well as stuff from other World. Fast Paced is good, but no description of the scene is not good, One sentence he dies and the next LINE, he will be Wandering the Universe Space

Dude Infinite Mana, Is a curse, the holder will die/explode, in the initial period. Have you read that Ice Dragon Novel???

Important Note Before You Start Reading! If you've ever read those Chinese novels where the protagonist is the "chosen one" and the entire world revolves around him—where even the most brilliant villain turns into a complete idiot when they meet the MC—then you're probably familiar with the trope. Well, this novel follows that same pattern, but with a twist: the world is, for some reason, completely brain-dead. The characters have access to magic, yet they only use the most basic spells and completely ignore the practical applications of their abilities. This is where the MC comes in. He introduces modern technology (basically, cheap ChatGPT helped) to bring everyday appliances into the world. In one chapter, he invents electricity, and the next day, he’s making air conditioners. The narrative skips over crucial inventions like transistors or semiconductors, which would have been more foundational. To top it off, the MC comes from the richest family and has the unique ability to wield all the elements—something that nobody in the world can do. But despite this, it doesn’t seem to matter at all. He has a supreme skill that less than 10 people in the entire world possess, but nobody seems to care. No one treats him like a celebrity or even a target of interest. The fact that he’s essentially a walking powerhouse is completely ignored, which just feels bizarre. No Reaction from World or No Information Spread.

Finally!!! Thanks For the Chapter.

The world-building is great and pretty solid, but something feels off. The crazy female lead, for instance, makes me wonder if she'll start engaging in NTR or create her own harem. Also, they've created this game world, yet they describe it as if the whole world is their enemy. On top of that, the story is really slow, with a lot of filler, in my opinion.