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  • DaoistVdoYZt
    DaoistVdoYZt10mth
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    what are the idea

    Ch 4 The outbreak of great war - 1
    The Blood of Prey
    Fantasy · Albedo_x
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  • DaoistVdoYZt
    DaoistVdoYZt10mth
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    I think this was a rush chapter... Everything happened fast

    Ch 3 The Door
    The Blood of Prey
    Fantasy · Albedo_x
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  • DaoistVdoYZt
    DaoistVdoYZt10mth
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    This is my first book, there are some grammar mistakes. Hope you will clear it all and update more chapters. It was really a good start, keep doing your work. Never stop. Update the next chapter soon as possible

    The Blood of Prey
    Fantasy · Albedo_x
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