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wtf is happening
is this Spanish? I'm guessing you said something about the protagonist being pathetic, very pathetic.
Yeah! wait what?
So he has the same pp length as the mc?
Why do I feel bad for him?
Is Miranda going to be in the harem?
True and it’s a turn off for me when they don’t have any composure
I can’t lie, making him look pathetic was really bad, you made him have no composure. I don’t know why you did that🤦 Other then that, I like it!