To_not_lose

and there will be no major change.

I'm not talking about changing the story, it's about the flow. So I decided to sharpen up the edges and make the lines better.

Alright. Thanks for pointing out a few flaws in the novel. I can only improve those parts now.

Ethereal are still going to aim at Zick's life.

If it's for revenge, Zick can sacrifice anything, including his father.

You want me to sacrifice his father? I don't see any reason for doing so though, his father's support would be indispensable. Sacrificing such a good pawn seems weird and unreal.

Celene might be hard to pronounce. You can imagine it like 'Selin' too.

Aster

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