what an incredible foreshadowing (I only read the spoilers)

Thanks for the honest review, I'll work on that when the website is fixed

The plot itself is interesting, and the way it's delivered is great as well. It just needs to be edited more and refined. This is just an opinion of mine but the paragraphs are too long and it gives me a headache. Other than that I'm really interested.

No offense taken ^_^ I'm still a student so I'm really busy with school work. Please forgive me

I'm really sorry, I'm trying to show that he didn't care enough about their appearances. Don't worry though, this is Arc 0 and there will be moments where I describe people in detail. You can also check my Twitter or Insta @YellowEnn_mc since I will be drawing them ^_^