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But then they go to the other extreme of writing bland characters that have no empathy and personality. Characters who commit violence just for the sake of it. When I say heroic characters I don’t mean all forgiving altruistic people, I mean someone who isn’t perfect but strives to be kind, they get angry, make mistakes, and resort to violence if they have to. I mean characters that feel real, not these dark lord wannabes that everyone seems to love nowadays.

I see. I get what you’re saying.

He will appear in the following chapters.

Sorry for the offense.

Please advise how the chapter could’ve been written better.

It was good read and interesting story with potential and I was enjoying it. The character progression was good and I like how you put your spin into the different established characters. My only problem was with mc obsessing with keeping the curse mark and keeping and creating Orochimaru entities in his mind and telling them his secrets. It’s my preference that I don’t like characters who take unnecessary risks in their obsession for power but you have done a great job.

You see, one may understand politics, know it’s importance and necessity in society and civilisation, acknowledge that they can’t escape the system and will be involved in it but still dislike the activities and study of the subject because THEY find it uninteresting or tedious not that Politics itself is uninteresting the individual finds the subject uninteresting.

Oh you’re one of those people who’ll just throw insults without adding substance to your points or educating others if you feel like they don’t understand something.

How is hating something you find uninteresting make you have low IQ. Hating politics doesn’t mean finding politics useless, harmful or unimportant. It means you find the study and process of politics uninteresting or boring.

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