Magic is way more versatile I agree that is what I claimed but I won't say powerful, means we can't actually put the two concepts on a scale and weigh them anyway as it would result in almost a never ending debate but yeah my idea is based upon the novel IGCA, in the novel's premise multiple powers exists and magic being the first one the protagonist encounters and the spirit power which is similar to curse energy of jjk world which was latest till the point I read. So yeah if you read the novel you can clearly see CE is stronger than magic but magic being more versatile in the opinion so yeah I was able to incorporate the elements properly based on the existing original novels

No I always used Ex you check if in the original too

Uh about that I would post it after I got things with me settle and from the current looks of the proceedings I don't think it would be anytime soon but then also I won't drop it and thank you for reading

No it was always Ex..

Yeah I need to edit it all signs sorry

Oh sorry sorry I forgot to change the double apostrophes to single.. no he is talking in his head it was just I used chatgpt for grammatical and spelling check and you see I have to take care of these things I am sorry and yeah there would be no fundamental changes just the rewrite would be cleaner and more sophisticated

Alan Lockwood

Ian Crown

Oh Don't worry about that.. I made him shrew but as you know he is just someone who is struggling for his survival even which he barely holds on based and lived a frugal lifestyle so first I want to solve it and then adding the human nature, the sin of greed that makes someone wants more and more to make him darker, sinister and ambitious person

I planned on making a detailed explanation at first but after a while I let it go.. see what I want to make is a pretty you know unique in my opinion since I haven't ever heard of power system like this and don't want to inform dump it all.. see unlike some traditional systems like cultivation and all I had planned a slightly different system so if I have to explain it would be all info dump which I like many other readers hate to read.. The most I can do for being clear is to slowly reveal the complex system and invest more on plots more than info dump copying from the likes of versatile mage and bit other type of writing but as you said to make plot more interesting I think I should reveal the system first to make readers more invested in a new system

Thank you

Yup

*don't our mc would use regressors to his advantage making use of the regressor's knowledge and possible advantage the regressor has to offer.

Hmm you might be confused with how I am suddenly portraying the regressor in a good light ain't you? See first of all it won't be something like regressor and mc being friends so if you are worried about that rest assured.. The regressor is someone focused on fighting reaver and I want him to take the lead to introduce mc to Reavers see I have read a lot of novels where there are just two things one that mc and protagoinist becomes friends which I do t like at all or they become enemy where regressor is portrayed as foolish which also goes to extreme. see I don't want to just go around and stepping down on logic and degrade regressor unnecessarily just because he isn't mc. They won't be friends nor would be enemies but would fight for a common goal where the regressor would introduce mc to the threats that are unknown to him as the regressor continues on with his cliche plots.

Nah I have a better plan

Yeah it was just annoying and unreal, the protagonist acted like an omniscient being and doing just a few things they gain the unbreakable loyalty of their targets while making promises they can't fulfill at all in their current state

Yeah