Im soo greatful for your heart felt review, I’ll keep try my best, thanks for your support

Im soo greatful for your heart felt review, I’ll keep try my best, thanks for your support

Thank you

What a beautiful Story, i love how its From The mc’s perspective, the way The Charcters Mind is being potrayed plays to the authors strengths

Good first chapter, i love how its being written from the main character’s perspective. the plot is Being developed well but the paCing in between lines and writing is pretty off, although you have to read more to get it so i guess it plays to the authors strengths

Tnx stAy Tuned

Stay tuned

Thanks

Thanks

Stay tuned

Thanks for your support

Had Creativity issues buy im bAck stay tuned

Thanks bro

Nice one, like the plot and The story telling

I Really like the feeling of this one but i lt’s like a play right

Good plot nice one indeed, just the pacing and writing are a little Too fast

Nice a good chapter but your pacing and writing can improve, So Keep going

I gave him a little more development In the new ch

I’l do my best to improve my writing quality

Thanks i’ll do my best to improve