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Yeah, put this in the Synopsis. You will attract more readers just from this intro. [img=strong]

Cool.

Is Scarlett Gatzke a real person?

Upload a bonus chapter yaara! This is too much of a cliffhanger!!!

No, just make him a stand-out player in 2008. Let them win in 2009.

Welcome back! We missed you and your amazing work

The story looks interesting, but the way it is written removes any interest. If possible, try getting a proofreader or maybe even put it through online tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT for proper structuring.

The MC is being such a doormat! Even though this is his favourite club, there is a limit to the amount of humiliation one should take. If he was any bit proud of himself, he would take his skills to any other club. -- Also Author what's with the mid-season chapter rewrites? They are completely confusing and are pulling away the immersion.

Chelsea! He's from Cobham and it would be a good story!

Any idea when the Author will be updating the remainder of these chapters?