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Genesis132mthReplied to Netherios00Zaphire- Genesis137mthCommented
how does posting stuff on wn makes them more accessible ? wct is already free to use. u r js copy-pasting them. some better reason might cut for it. bruh
Note* Every chapter is taken from Witchculttranslations but I decided to make them more accessible to people by posting them on webnovel. - Genesis137mthCommented
ah she has it tough.
Looking at her Victoria gave her a right slap - Genesis137mthCommented
replace 'majestic', consider 'sinister' or 'grave'
"Have you forgotten who owns the house?" Kayla said as her appearance became majestic. - Genesis137mthCommented
consider a better phrasing. the metaphor doesn't suit the mood. and there's some grammatical error too. like ' her current expresssion was nothing like what it used to be. instead of her cheerful demeanor, she was crying like a madwoman (metaphor)'
"Yes sire" Peter said looking at the crying Kayla with a pitiful expression. Her current expression is inappropriate and nothing like the past Kayla who is filled with good vibes and positive energy. Now she looks like a mad woman whose child was stolen from her. - Genesis137mthCommented
wow! starting with a bang!!
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THIS IS THE OPENING SCENE!IT GOES WITH A BLAST! a silent one tho. thnx for the reference anyways ^^
"Attention! Code Black in the lobby! I repeat! CODE BLACK!" - Genesis137mthReplied to Lao_Stev
might be chatgpt. who knows? but the language is kinda same as that. I know it cuz i used to use it
Suddenly, a thought struck her, and she exclaimed, "Oh! I almost forgot the kids might still be sleeping. Should I wake them?" she muttered aloud. - Genesis137mthReplied to Ender_Peach
right abt that
And with her family by her side, on her death bed and as she was tearing up she said nothing more nor less than just "Don't forget me." - Genesis137mthCommented
a Lil typo here....
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somehow i feel like saying, "please forget me". if i were her that is
And with her family by her side, on her death bed and as she was tearing up she said nothing more nor less than just "Don't forget me." - Genesis137mthCommented
I want to eat your pancreas
But as she went in for a normal health check at the hospital since she was experiencing abdominal pain and unnatural weight loss, she left the room with a diagnosis of pancreatic cancer. - Genesis137mthCommented
it's really odd to find a college student with a healthy lifestyle
A woman in her early twenties, with long braided blond hair and green eyes, a college student with a healthy lifestyle, parents she could look up to and a little brother she could take care of, this is who Jinny was. - Genesis137mthCommented
ah lol, 🤣 the demonic peach
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I am getting sus vibes here
"Speaking of which why did you even know how a gun works? If my scan was correct you haven't used one in your life." Peach questioned. - Genesis137mthCommented
poor girl, didn't have the odds to stay a bit longer with her guy :(
"Well, not really. When you were running from the goblin I did a rough scan of your brain. Remember when I said "Done"? That's when I finished the brain scan. Pretty sad life story by the way." Peach explained.