Poseidon1378

keep up the good work, I wish you would release more chapters but also the ones you release are so well thought out that I can't really complain

oh my sweet summer child, if you only knew what was coming

If elden ring is a RPG then you are role playing the victim.

I am currently working on the next one so stay tuned for one later today

no just busy will release a new chapter tomorrow

can't wait for more, keep up the good work

this is one of if not the best dragon novels I have ever read, great in depth story telling and the author goes into great detail to give a good picture as to what is happening at all times. I always look forward to the next chapter.

I'm leaning towards space-time and gravity because gravity is essentially just a force exerted on space by matter, he would be able to form stars from nebulas, or a black hole just by compressing matter. imagine him fighting someone then all of a sudden they just disappear because he stops time and at the same time creates a black hole that destroys them instantly. also if he is going to be on a planet then a affinity over stars is not very usefull

I plan to have some later in the story, but I don't want to spoil the surprise.

I know that it is cliche to give myself a five star review but I mean I enjoy writing this book for your enjoyment! I hope that all of my readers feel the same way when reading this story, I try and ensure that I update at least four times a week and usually rewrite sections of each chapter before release to ensure that the story flows well and if you cross reference chapters everything will still add up. I hope that others leave more reviews with their incite so that I can improve my overall story and writing. So if you would like to give me some feedback it is always welcome, positive or negative.