I like the story, and the main charActer is crazy asf. really good book but the writIng style isn’t for me

I’m really gett into It now this story is about to become crazy,i can already feel it

Good chapter, the quality of your writing improved but you Can still do better

Well I like the plot so much but the writing could be better, but any way the plot is to intriguing and I like how you make us aware of the characters emotions through your writing style so I recommend this for isekai lovers