Rae_Nelson
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Rae_Nelson11mthCommentedooh lol watch out for that Brother
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I like that
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good details
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good
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great details and I like the writing
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great details
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good description
The Weaker Kamairas were The Ryot Clan; and they had skin a greyish - green that took on a scaly look to it, with the body of a Giant man, it's shoulders were as wide as a man is tall. Their hands were big enough to wrap around a grown mans torso. Having a head of a Boar. Horns either came out of their lower jaws or from their heads. - Rae_Nelson11mthCommented
good description
The Kamairas were all gigantic in size compared to that of a human. They were what looked to be a mutation of multiple Creatures fused into one body. The Stronger Kamairas were The Howlers Clan, and they were covered in Black coarse fur and gave off the look one would think a werewolf would in fact look like, with two rows of razor sharp teeth; they had large bat-like wings and their bottom half was reptilian that had black scales that covered their entire legs, with a long spikey black scaly tail. - Rae_Nelson11mthCommented
great detail
The land was surrounded by massive mountains whose peaks vanished into the clouds seeming to disappear into the Heavens. In the bowl of the mountains the land inside was made up of mostly dense, thick forest. The branches so entwined and tangled in such a way; that hardly any trace of the sun could even get through and because of this the temperature inside of the forest was cold, dark and gloomy. The air was heavy and stifling. A thick, eerie fog that emitted a feeling of Dread and Evil never lifted from the forest floor, and making it near impossible for one to watch where they were walking, also making it quite easy for one to become lost inside the forest that not many ventured into willingly. - Rae_Nelson11mthCommented
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The biggest fear is of the unknown. - Rae_Nelson11mthCommented
Very deep
She couldn't describe the agonizing feeling that gnawed on her insides. "I always believed that I had enough Faith that there was some goodness in myself that would await me on the other side of the Abyss. I held confidence that even if I couldn't do it; if I couldn't find my way back, my friends and family could potentially pull me back." Sinyster said, while her heart tightened and she felt her eyes starting to sting. - Rae_Nelson11mthCommented
I like that! good sentence to start a suspenseful book
The biggest fear is of the unknown.