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    Onion_lover2 days ago
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    Probably the most cliche novel you have ever read. Every side character either wants to kill the mc after looking at him just once, or worships him as their ancestor after he reveals his divine talent. no in between Everything just falls into his hands, as he is somehow born right next to the inheritance of the strongest being in the world. And of course the strongest man on the continent has left the only possible way to get his inheritance within the small sect the mc joins. There‘s also Divine fires, of which there are 3 of about 30 in existence in the small continent the mc spawns in, while another continent thousands of times bigger only has one. Of course, it is not really explained why the mc is so much more talented than anybody else. One example: it is said that you need to cultivate 30 techniques to supreme mastery to condense a peak golden core. The mc merely cultivates 32 and somehow achieves double divine core that hasn‘t been seen within a million years. Same thing happens again laters. The mc puts up feats that are theoretically achievable by others, but for some reason no one replicates them, even later on, when he has reached quite a few higher level areas (around chapter 600) he is somehow able to cross more than a major realm against supreme geniuses who maybe don’t have the same unseen in millions of years foundation as him, but are still just one level below him in everything else. The worst thing is how repetitive the chapters are. Sometimes it’s just the mc gradually revealing his talent and every bystander comments on it like. „omg he has a sword heart“ and then he reveals the next one, which is again commented on, all the way up to the 15tj, at which point the whole chapter has been filled with slop we have already read like a hundred chapters prior. And also, for a novel that has sword in the title, it is quite stunning how the mc only really uses his sword about once very hundred chapters and just one shots everybody else with his fists. Don’t get me wrong, i still read the story, the mc is op and progress is fast. But don’t expect any dialogue or story progression of quality. Even the descriptions of the surroundings couldn’t be less in depth, leaving much to the imagination.

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    Onion_lover14 days ago
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    I am quite a fan of fast- paced stories, so I never thought that the day would come where I say this. But this story is definitely too fast paced. With over 40 major realms, each of which contains at least 5 minor ones, the mc ascends about one minor realm each second chapter. This means that any sub-plots are completely uninteresting, as you know that they are going to end within a few chapters. The only focus is put on the mc increasing in strength, without even doing anything. He just stays holed up in his cave and sends out his clones to do stuff for him. And we don‘t even know how they do it, they just go around killing, so that he has quintillions of evolution essence suddenly saved up after a time skip. The worst part though are the side characters. male side characters don’t exist, while female ones are only there to fawn over the mc. No woman would ever act like any of the girls in this story do. And all of them are annoying without any real personality. After a few chapters i just found myself auto scrolling skipping over the plot waiting for the next status screen. Definitely not worth your money

  • Onion_lover
    Onion_lover2 months ago
    Commented

    2% chance for what? To get the ticket, or an item of a certain grade?

  • Onion_lover
    Onion_lover3 months ago
    Commented

    If serious punch is anywhere near the level of Saitama‘s, then it’s already game over

  • Onion_lover
    Onion_lover3 months ago
    Commented

    Too stretched out for my liking. After the first few chats I just skipped over the rest. We get it the mc is a bad league player who can’t come up with roasts. could have established that within like a fifth of the words you used

  • Onion_lover
    Onion_lover3 months ago
    Commented

    stop the author notes. completely kills immersion

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  • Onion_lover
    Onion_lover3 months ago
    Commented

    Author notes getting annoying

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God’s Conquest: The Lord of Angels

Gods exist. Every single one of the known gods of earth and trillions of other gods. They all reside in the divine realm from where they control their followers and gather faith to increase their strength. Though they do exist, they do not care about the joy or suffering of the people on Earth. They only care about their personal power. On one particular day, where all the citizens of earth suddenly vanished into thin air, another 8 Billion gods suddenly appeared inside of the divine realm. Through a whim of Fate, all the humans of earth have joined the ranks of the other gods as well as their fight for dominion and strength. Armed with just their starting species that defines their future as well as a handicap that comes in the form of their lacking knowledge. They need to do their best to get stronger or else they might die in the battle for dominion. Among those humans are Ezequiel and his sister Marie. Two orphans who experienced a shitty life on Earth now have the chance for a completely new start. Will they finally reach the top and turn their life around? Ezequiel will do everything to never be at the bottom again. Even if it means fighting against the entire universe, no matter if his opponent is a god or mortal. Things you can expect: - Unique Power System and World Background - Relatively fast pacing - Overpowered but still cautious Mc - A lot of fighting * * * * * I will try to update thrice a week.

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