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Dude are you going make him some kind of hidden protector and leaving momonga as guild leader and he will also come to new world then this novel will not move too far I have seen plenty overlord fic In which mc and momonga both travel to new world this does not work well you see trying to maintain a balance between them will be difficult if novel uses momonga as main plot charector then people will be dissatisfied with the mc being a follower or something if you make mc as main plot charector then people will be dissatisfied with you since you undermined momonga soo yeahh don't doo that just make mc as guild leader and only he will go to new world
It's so boring mc doesn't have any kind of interest in any of the world he claims that he wants to enjoy and such but when he goes there he doesn't even interact much with that world only doing minimum things he wants and leaves and about using his power he is not creative at all he could have made many no of things but yeah it's kinda disappointing knowing this could have been much better
Maybe greyback was a exception not all werewolf can control their transformation and most of the wizarding world discriminates against someone who is turned into a werewolf this happened specifically towards remus even though many students knew for nearly a year but still were afraid of him when they got to know of his werewolf status soo yeahh vampire is better route to take for immortality if they are in the hp universe than werewolf because atleast they can control themself with enough blood not lose control during every full moon
Okay soo he just left the body and blood of a celestial laying there did he not know how a entire mine is made from a corpse of a celestial and even if he did not want to collect resources from the body atleast he could have dealt with it knowing how many mad mans are trying to research the body
Why does mc acts like a god I mean he just moments away from death and lost his right hand man but noo instead of getting getting better and crub his pride he became more prideful and not in a good way but childish way exactly like Joffrey
Why can he use magic hole Karma Taj uses magic by signing contract with other dimension or something no has internal energy like magic in Marvel expect for scarlet witch and even one piece doesn't have any magic in it so does the ring allows him to use magic without signing a contract
There are so many potholes how come there is a wifi it is in the 90s internet was only a thing back then I don't think wifi was that popular and how come doffy can find indentity of almost every one but shiled took many day to do the same with him