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Firstly I'd love to start with the synopsis like I usually do as the synopsis is one that determines if your book gets readers or not and if your book is going to survived.the length of the synopsis I perfect but the quality is poor sorry to say.I'd prefer you make it more suspending to arise readers curiosity about the main character that literally listingt out what happened to the main character or what's going to happenthe novel is a nice one and has strong potentials and I urge our author to please develop more ^_^

loving the flow can you please make the length of the chapter longeratleast 1200 words

firstly I'd like to start with the synopsis,it's not really attractive to readersthe story is really nice and I love the flow.I hope our author can improve his narration and work on his synopsiscan't wait to read more^_^

you're welcomealso please do some research as switching between prose and drama may confuse readers^_^

why do I feel all these ain't gonna end well?:-\

this book is super intruding and has lots of potential.it's surely going to do well once our author improves herself.firstly the synopsis need some development to capture the readers same with the narration.I know everyone has their own perspective when it comes to narrationbut I'd like to ask if our author is writing a prose or drama?sorry if I sounded too inquisitive but I hope our author can do better.

to be honest,this novel has great potentials.after reading just a few chapters Ive been captivated to read more and hope author can keep up the good works and improve more