ArtbusterBeeze

This is a story that I read and I believe that it has potential. The story, characters and world is good, and I will give it full marks, but there are a few grammatical errors you should go over. I really like the story premise though and the plot. great job.

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They became lions.

Thank you.

Thank you. More chapters will come soon enough.

This was quite well made and I like it. The beginning took me by storm when it came to character design. Author knows characters well and have a big vocabulary for them, so this is quite unique with the style. There weren't much Grammar issues to speak up except a few mispelled words, but it didn't take anything away from the experience. The Action was pretty cool too. This is a Great story hands down.

Well this is one psychotic story i'll tell you that. Each of the characters in this family are defined with their own personality and I like how the author brings out their emotions and life despite the whole crazy atmosphere behind their lives. The Sttyle of writing is solid . I didn't see many Grammar mistakes. The world builds greatly and it is a solid yet Wacky story.

Thank you very much.

This story starts off with the birth of a god. It's pretty cool. I like the gods we get introduced to. Very interesting. It is an entertaining and has it's moments of great character design with story development. Good work,